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awesome

zero bombers, eh... yeah I hate it when that happens...

The song was great. Melody, beats, leads... everything was perfect.

Really well done 10/10

unrealdark responds:

Thanks man! finally my task is complete on the beats!! :D
hehe, thx for the review and I love the 10/10! :O

Beats are great...

Those beats are definetly better than what you usually submit, so that part fits my expectations.

Now all you need is to put in some leads.

As you said, it can get a bit repetitive, but overall it's good song.

unrealdark responds:

Thanks, I will work on that though, could take a bit longer since I am going to school again, and taking exams.

Hmm...

As always, your melodies are top notch. The beat could be improved upon, but the song definetly gave an angelic feel.

If you woudln't mind, I'd like to make a remix of this song, and I also see that you are having some difficulty with finding an ending. If you could send an FLP of what you've done so far over AIM or email, I'd really appreciate it.

unrealdark responds:

I know I gotta fix the beats, but I deffinately need help in that from others, I often make a generic self made crappy beat, so yeah homemade isn't the best I suppose. :P I think I got to ask someone to help me out or so.
But thanks for the review you gave me alittle more insight what could be improved, so thanks man! :D

I know what you mean

My friend does that all the time. He randomly hums tunes and then tries to put it into a song. His only problem is that he always compares trance songs to video game music, "This sounds like Donkey Kong water level!", "This sounds like underground Metroid level!" His weakness is beats, he can never really master them.

The melody was awesome. I don't know about that "are you ready" at the beginning though. Seems abit cliche to me, but that's just my opinion.

unrealdark responds:

Yeah well I just made it in like 2 min, so wanted to gave it something extra with the vocal: 'Are you ready' + the crowds being happy. :)
Well thanks for your oppinion and deff the review + 9. :D

Very nice

That first tune was awesome.

But the second one blew it away (just need to work on the beat).

I know it's experimental, but that was fantastic.

unrealdark responds:

Alright, Thanks man! :D You'd made me realise that I need to get working onto my songs.
I think I will work on both now though. Once again thanks for the review.

Very nice

Really liked that melody. I don't know about 2:36- though, I understand what you're doing, but it feels like you messing with the pitch/tune like that takes away from the feel of the song. Just my opinion.
And yeah, about the fool who gives 0's to all the songs. I just uploaded a song a few minutes ago (Tangible) and the first vote was a 0. I hate it when people do that...

Awesome song.

fishfood2021 responds:

Thanks for the review buddy :). I like to think that some of my songs have story lines lol. Thats why I put that part in the song. It gave a mood change and then afterwards the same melody came in :).

I do think it works but I'll keep the tip in mind.

Also, I really wish there were another site like this but just for the music. Then maybe I might get people who actually listen to music. But until then I have newgrounds. :(

Thanks so much for the review :).

Play smash (ssbm/ssbb), make music, browse youtube... the works.

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